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== Rewrite status ==
== Rewrite status ==
This page has been manually marked for a rewrite due to its poor wording and improper formatting. Consequentially it has not been featured on pages such as [[Portal:Players]] and [[Portal:Players/North America]]. Suggested improvements to the page include: removing the high frequency of commas in each sentence, applying links to key words that link to other pages, removing links that have been repeated and adding more formal language. --[[User:Garlic|garlic]] ([[User talk:Garlic|talk]]) 04:24, 5 November 2016 (UTC)
This page has been manually marked for a rewrite due to its poor wording and improper formatting. Consequentially it has not been featured on pages such as [[Portal:Players]] and [[Portal:Players/North America]].
 
Suggested improvements to the page include:
*Removing the high frequency of commas in each sentence
*Applying links to key words, even if they do not link to other pages
*Removing links that have been repeated
*Adding more formal language.
 
--[[User:Garlic|garlic]] ([[User talk:Garlic|talk]]) 04:24, 5 November 2016 (UTC)

Latest revision as of 07:13, 6 November 2016

Rewrite status[edit source]

This page has been manually marked for a rewrite due to its poor wording and improper formatting. Consequentially it has not been featured on pages such as Portal:Players and Portal:Players/North America.

Suggested improvements to the page include:

  • Removing the high frequency of commas in each sentence
  • Applying links to key words, even if they do not link to other pages
  • Removing links that have been repeated
  • Adding more formal language.

--garlic (talk) 04:24, 5 November 2016 (UTC)