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This page has been manually marked for a rewrite due to its poor wording and improper formatting. Consequentially it has not been featured on pages such as [[Portal:Players]] and [[Portal:Players/North America]]. | This page has been manually marked for a rewrite due to its poor capitalisation, wording and improper formatting. Consequentially it has not been featured on pages such as [[Portal:Players]] and [[Portal:Players/North America]]. | ||
Suggested improvements to the page include: | Suggested improvements to the page include: | ||
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*Adding more formal language. | *Adding more formal language. | ||
--[[User:Garlic|garlic]] ([[User talk:Garlic|talk]]) | --[[User:Garlic|garlic]] ([[User talk:Garlic|talk]]) 05:48, 5 November 2016 (UTC) | ||
Revision as of 05:48, 5 November 2016
Rewrite status
This page has been manually marked for a rewrite due to its poor capitalisation, wording and improper formatting. Consequentially it has not been featured on pages such as Portal:Players and Portal:Players/North America.
Suggested improvements to the page include:
- Removing the high frequency of commas in each sentence
- Proper capitalisation
- Applying links to key words that link to other pages
- Removing links that have been repeated
- Adding more formal language.