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This page has been manually marked for a rewrite due to its poor wording and improper formatting. Consequentially it has not been featured on pages such as [[Portal:Players]] and [[Portal:Players/North America]]. Suggested improvements to the page include: removing the high frequency of commas in each sentence, applying links to key words that link to other pages, removing links that have been repeated and adding more formal language. --[[User:Garlic|garlic]] ([[User talk:Garlic|talk]]) 04:24, 5 November 2016 (UTC) | This page has been manually marked for a rewrite due to its poor wording and improper formatting. Consequentially it has not been featured on pages such as [[Portal:Players]] and [[Portal:Players/North America]]. | ||
Suggested improvements to the page include: removing the high frequency of commas in each sentence, applying links to key words that link to other pages, removing links that have been repeated and adding more formal language. --[[User:Garlic|garlic]] ([[User talk:Garlic|talk]]) 04:24, 5 November 2016 (UTC) | |||
Revision as of 04:27, 5 November 2016
Rewrite status
This page has been manually marked for a rewrite due to its poor wording and improper formatting. Consequentially it has not been featured on pages such as Portal:Players and Portal:Players/North America.
Suggested improvements to the page include: removing the high frequency of commas in each sentence, applying links to key words that link to other pages, removing links that have been repeated and adding more formal language. --garlic (talk) 04:24, 5 November 2016 (UTC)